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Awesome!

No, it's fine.

Anyway, here's the level:

Scuro Valley (translates to Dark Valley)

A somewhat long level made of a dusty, dirty, and abandoned valley full of dead trees, Pokeys, and a few Stackin' Stus and some empty caves. Towards the end are three old pyramids, two almost completely destroyed and a third in the middle still standing. There is also a labyrinth of underground tunnels below, full of new scorpion-like enemies. Luckily, the tunnels provide excellent travel for going from one area to another. Also, to the far right, is an almost completely dried up river. To add to the theme, their is also occasional thunder and lightning, and the music is very low, so the player will mostly hear only the wind blowing.

Just wanted to create a creepy, intense level.

My next level will not take place on the island- but above it!

Well, I'm not sure about the weekliness thingy :P, but we could have polls.

Well, here goes nothing:

PREVIOUSLY, ON DARKNESS SHINES

Finally, it was Toad who looked up and smiled for the first time in days. "Look! Up there!" The other looked and saw they had reached the end of the tunnel and at the end was a rusty ladder with a tight, manhole-like cover.

Luigi climbed up, followed, by Toad, Peach, and Mario. "I got it!" He yelled, and finally moved the cover off the exit. They climbed up and found themselves in the middle of a vast jungle.

"Great! Now what?!" Luigi yelled. Then, they were quickly circle by Piantas and Nokis covered in some sort of Indian clothes and wearing Indian Masks. Oh, and they were all pointing spears toward them.

Mario, Peach, Luigi, and Toad all screamed.

NOW, WE RETURN:

Luigi fainted. Later, Mario, Peach, Toad, and the unconscious Luigi were tied to a thick pole hanging above a large firepit with the tribe in a circle-formation around the pit chanting something and dancing.

Peach squeaked "Is this how it ends?" Mario looked down and gulped. "I think so, Princess." He replied in sadness. Toad didn't even try to talk. He felt that this was all his fault: he was the one who saw the entrance and led them straight into danger.

As the tribe chanted, Mario looked down. Creepy shapes seem to loom from the fire, and he didn't like that one bit.

Just then, a middle-aged female pianta in a Safari suit walked through the crowd. She took a glance at them, and then put her hand up. The tribe stopped. She spoke in perfect english: "Let them down."

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After the strange pianta allowed them to come down and saved them from death, the gang were treated like gods and goddesses. The tribe doctors helped them heal their wounds, fed them, and bathed them.

When Luigi finally regained consiousness, he found himself lying on cold, hard dirt in a roomy tent. He looked around, wondering where he was, when Mario, Peach, and Toad entered the tent, followed by a tribe member.

Luigi almost screamed and fainted again, but Mario informed him of what happened. Luigi felt his forehead and felt a bandage where his concussion was. He almost started to cry (tears of joy, of course), when the tribe member spoke up in a large, booming voice.

"Mario, follow me. Our leader wishes to talk to you."

Who is this mysterious pianta? Why did she let them go? How will they reach the President now? Find out, next time!

That is very fine. ;D

Oh, what do you know? Now it works. I'll rewrite it. This weekend. Sorry guys.

Yay!