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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 4, 2011 9:27:04 GMT -5
Part 6:
"Those creatures are genetic mutants." The Noki Elder said. "Mario, do you remember that yellow submarine from Ricco Harbor? The president and some of the highest-ranking scientists on the island would enter the tunnels under Ricco Harbor, where the experiments were rumored to take place."
Mario blinked. "Are you sure? I've been down there, there's nothing but a small Blooper-surfing course."
"I said rumored, didn't I?" The Elder asked him. "Anyway, they loved to perform all kinds of experiments- including mutation. One day, it went horribly wrong and created the creatures attacking the harbor today. But a while ago, these creatures had attacked before. Everyone was always suspicious the the president was evil and corrupt, but now it couldn't be more obvious. That's why we had fought."
"But what happened to them? How are they out now? And why does the government want our heads?" Luigi poured questions out of his mouth. The Noki Elder sighed again.
"When the war ended, President Ster locked them up somewhere on the island. We have yet to find out why they are back." The Elder explained. "And why do they want you dead? It's only simple. To prevent any where else in our world finding out about this, the president has ordered all officials to not let anyone enter or leave the island."
Everyone looked down at their feet. This was just too much to take in. A corrupt government. A Rebellion. Mutations.
After five minutes of nothing, the Noki Elder spoke up. "We need you." He said.
"W-what?" Toad asked, cowering behind Princess Peach's dress.
"We need you to join our rebellion." The Noki Elder replied. "You're the best fighters we know. We could really use you in this war. And this time, we plan to assassinate our president. It's either this, or the government can find you and kill you. You have only this choice."
Mario looked at Luigi. Luigi looked at Toad. Toad looked at Peach. They all looked at each other, then turned to the Noki Elder.
"We're in."
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Post by UltimoPianta404 on Aug 4, 2011 13:09:18 GMT -5
Nice. Playing out really well.
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 4, 2011 13:11:54 GMT -5
Thanks. Now that all that talking is done, I'm gonna try and get more into the plot.
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Post by zommy08 on Aug 4, 2011 16:12:46 GMT -5
Still awesome.
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 8, 2011 21:24:35 GMT -5
Woah! Sorry for no part today, but I guess my mind's been on other things lately and I completely forgot. Sorry guys, I'll update again on Thursday.
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Post by UltimoPianta404 on Aug 8, 2011 23:00:02 GMT -5
 ...JK Understood.
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Post by zommy08 on Aug 9, 2011 3:57:06 GMT -5
I understand.  |
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 11, 2011 9:13:44 GMT -5
Part 7:
A week after their discovery of the rebellion, they were now all part of it. No rushing into action, of course.
They were simply training.
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The Noki Grandson and Luigi were in a secret, sealed room under the cavern, known as the traget-shooting range. The grandson had given Luigi a bazooka.
"You know how to work a bazooka?" The Noki Grandson asked.
"N-no?" Luigi stammered.
"Good Enough." The Grandson replied, "FIRE!"
Luigi screamed, let go off the bazooka, and ran screaming out of the room. "Fire! There's a fire!!! People with the name Luigi first!" The Grandson smacked his head, picked up the bazooka , and ran after Luigi.
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Mario wasn't exactly having the best time ever.
"What are you doing?" His Noki Trainer asked.
"Jumping!" Mario excalmed, "What do you think? That's how I defeat all my enemies."
The Trainer groaned. "Jumping? That's it? You think jumping on the President's head is going to stop him? No!" The Trainer dug around in a large chest until he pulled out a machete.
"You wanna fight, you gotta fight with a sword!" The Trainer barked.
"But, a machete isn't a sword, it's a knife-" Mario started until the Trainer pointed the knife towards him.
"What was that, soldier?" The Trainer demanded.
Mario gulped.
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Peach and Toad were having the worst luck of all.
Their trainer was a overweight female Pianta who must've been the Queen of Mean.
"Look at you all! Skinny, weak... just despicable!" She yelled at their faces.
"Um, excuse me, but-" Peach began to say, but then the Pianta looked at her.
"What. Is. It?" She growled. Peach whimpered and stopped talking, and the Pianta smirked.
"When does our training start?" Toad gathered all his courage to ask her the question.
"Never!" The Pianta screamed. "You two are the worst I've seen in my life, no amount of training could help you two!"
Toad started crying, and their trainer smirked again.
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That night, they all ate dinner in the submarine.
"So Elder, is our training complete yet?" Mario asked
The Noki Elder shook his head and chuckled. "It's only been a day. Do you really think your training is over?"
Mario, Luigi, Toad, and Peach all looked at each other again.
"Um... yes?" Luigi asked hopefully.
The Elder, the Grandson, and the other trainers had a good laugh.
The Noki Elder shook his head again. "You still need to-"
But he never finished his sentence. Because just then, the submarine exploded.
TO BE CONTINUED!
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Post by UltimoPianta404 on Aug 11, 2011 11:05:42 GMT -5
Interesting...
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Post by zommy08 on Aug 11, 2011 11:41:17 GMT -5
Cliffhanger...
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 11, 2011 11:44:32 GMT -5
CAN'T... HANG... ON... MUCH... LONGER!!!
I doubt anyone will EVER get that reference.
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Post by zommy08 on Aug 11, 2011 13:11:43 GMT -5
Nope.
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 11, 2011 13:17:57 GMT -5
Excellent. But anyway, new part up next Monday!
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Post by zommy08 on Aug 11, 2011 15:28:50 GMT -5
Lookin' forward to it!
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 15, 2011 12:23:03 GMT -5
Part 7:
Viewer Discretion is Advised: (I didn't rate this PG-13 for nothing)
"Mario... Mario?... " Mario heard the voice as he slowly opened his eyes and came back to consciousness. "MARIO!!!" He suddenly jerked up and immediately felt a pain in his right foot and fell to the ground. "Mario!" The voice was coming from Peach, who ran over to him as fast as she could in her dress. "M-Mario? Are you okay?" She asked him.
Mario groaned. "What happened? Am I dead?" Peach shook her head, and helped Mario up. He winced when he put his foot on the ground again. Peach whimpered, and Mario saw tears on her face from the corner of his eye. "There was a- there... was..." Peach broke down to sobbing. Mario looked around.
They were on the cavern floor, somehow thrown out of the sub. The Submarine! Mario looked at it's direction but only saw a large floating pile of ash that slowly sank upright into the black water.
"IT EXPLODED!" Mario jerked his head to the right and saw Luigi helping Toad get up. Toad's arm looked like it was hurt, and Luigi had a nasty bruise on his head. He might've had a concussion.
Before Mario spoke, he heard someone moan for help. Peach rushed over to the voice and saw their Pianta trainer lying there on the ground, fulls of cuts and gashes. "Help... me..." She moaned as if it hurt to talk. Peach thought about all the nasty things she had done. But that didn't mean she deserved to die. Peach put out her hand, and the trainer grabbed it, only to let go. Peach looked at her face. Her eyes were closed. Peach started to cry again till Toad pulled her back with his good arm. "Not her fault!" He exclaimed, but he was tearing up as well.
The gang all came together, Luigi helping Mario to walk. "Who bombed us?!" Luigi yelled, "I thought this was a secret!" Mario answered, "Maybe It was on all along and none of us ever knew it?" Luigi pondered this. "Perhaps. But still, how did it get down into the sub?"
"I know." The gang all turned in surprise to see the Noki Elder lying, covered by a piece of the burning sub. Peach screamed, while the men came over to him as fast as they could. "Noki Elder! We need to get you out of here!" Mario said, but the Elder struggled and put a finger over Mario's mouth.
"Don't try, sonny. It's too late for me." The Elder breathed. "Elder! Who did it?" Toad screamed, "Who planted the bomb?!" The Elder breathed again. "It was... my... oh, my..." The Elder didn't breath again. This time, everyone cried.
A half-hour of tears and comfort later, Luigi got up. Mario looked up. "Luigi! You have a concussion! What are you doing?!" Luigi looked at his brother, his eyes welling up in tears again. "We have to go. Mario, we need to kill that president." Mario looked down at the ground for a minute, then looked up and nodded.
"C'mon guys." Mario and Luigi helped the others up and led them to a large steel door, and punched in a code. The door slowly opened, and they exited. While the others were ahead, Mario leaned against a wall and got one last glimpse of the sub sinking before the door closed.
Then he continued on.
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...JK
