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Post by zommy08 on Aug 15, 2011 13:03:54 GMT -5
Duh duh duuuuh! Like it!
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Post by UltimoPianta404 on Aug 15, 2011 15:39:11 GMT -5
HE'S STILL A MURDERER, MOMMY!
I hope at least one of you will get that reference.
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 15, 2011 19:24:22 GMT -5
Don't worry, I'm a big Chuggaaconroy fan. Thanks to Mario Wiki for introducing me to him in the first place. I also the TheRunawayGuys as well (he's one of them).
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 18, 2011 16:11:06 GMT -5
Part... whatever part this is.
Only putting up the "Viewer Discretion is Advised" thing if it's needed. For now, it isn't.
Mario and the others walked in the dark entrance, only a small, dim lantern lit up came around every half a mile or so. Mario tried to strike up a conversation. "Luigi, you really shouldn't be walking with that concussion-" He started, but Luigi replied flatly "Says the guy who's limping alone on a broken ankle." Mario didn't try again.
He had never heard his brother sound so hostile, but this was war. And war changed everything.
An hour or two passed, and they were all starting to get tired. They wondered if they would simply die in these tunnels and be forgotten.
Finally, it was Toad who looked up and smiled for the first time in days. "Look! Up there!" The other looked and saw they had reached the end of the tunnel and at the end was a rusty ladder with a tight, manhole-like cover.
Luigi climbed up, followed, by Toad, Peach, and Mario. "I got it!" He yelled, and finally moved the cover off the exit. They climbed up and found themselves in the middle of a vast jungle.
"Great! Now what?!" Luigi yelled. Then, they were quickly circle by Piantas and Nokis covered in some sort of Indian clothes and wearing Indian Masks. Oh, and they were all pointing spears toward them.
Mario, Peach, Luigi, and Toad all screamed.
NEXT TIME ON DARKNESS SHINES:
Luigi fainted.
COMING SOON!
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Post by UltimoPianta404 on Aug 18, 2011 18:33:38 GMT -5
Heheheh.  |
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Post by zommy08 on Aug 20, 2011 5:24:30 GMT -5
Nice. ;D
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 23, 2011 7:21:04 GMT -5
More coming tonight! (Hopefully).
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Post by zommy08 on Aug 23, 2011 10:38:56 GMT -5
Yay!
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 23, 2011 16:17:45 GMT -5
I just wrote a new part of Darkness Shines, and for some reason, my computer can't load the page when I hit the post button, so I just lost all my work. And it only happens on this thread.
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 23, 2011 16:19:17 GMT -5
Oh, what do you know? Now it works. I'll rewrite it. This weekend. Sorry guys.
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Post by UltimoPianta404 on Aug 23, 2011 19:06:14 GMT -5
That's okay. |
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Post by zommy08 on Aug 24, 2011 13:38:45 GMT -5
That is very fine. ;D
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Post by sunshineforever on Aug 24, 2011 15:55:16 GMT -5
Well, here goes nothing:
PREVIOUSLY, ON DARKNESS SHINES
Finally, it was Toad who looked up and smiled for the first time in days. "Look! Up there!" The other looked and saw they had reached the end of the tunnel and at the end was a rusty ladder with a tight, manhole-like cover.
Luigi climbed up, followed, by Toad, Peach, and Mario. "I got it!" He yelled, and finally moved the cover off the exit. They climbed up and found themselves in the middle of a vast jungle.
"Great! Now what?!" Luigi yelled. Then, they were quickly circle by Piantas and Nokis covered in some sort of Indian clothes and wearing Indian Masks. Oh, and they were all pointing spears toward them.
Mario, Peach, Luigi, and Toad all screamed.
NOW, WE RETURN:
Luigi fainted. Later, Mario, Peach, Toad, and the unconscious Luigi were tied to a thick pole hanging above a large firepit with the tribe in a circle-formation around the pit chanting something and dancing.
Peach squeaked "Is this how it ends?" Mario looked down and gulped. "I think so, Princess." He replied in sadness. Toad didn't even try to talk. He felt that this was all his fault: he was the one who saw the entrance and led them straight into danger.
As the tribe chanted, Mario looked down. Creepy shapes seem to loom from the fire, and he didn't like that one bit.
Just then, a middle-aged female pianta in a Safari suit walked through the crowd. She took a glance at them, and then put her hand up. The tribe stopped. She spoke in perfect english: "Let them down."
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After the strange pianta allowed them to come down and saved them from death, the gang were treated like gods and goddesses. The tribe doctors helped them heal their wounds, fed them, and bathed them.
When Luigi finally regained consiousness, he found himself lying on cold, hard dirt in a roomy tent. He looked around, wondering where he was, when Mario, Peach, and Toad entered the tent, followed by a tribe member.
Luigi almost screamed and fainted again, but Mario informed him of what happened. Luigi felt his forehead and felt a bandage where his concussion was. He almost started to cry (tears of joy, of course), when the tribe member spoke up in a large, booming voice.
"Mario, follow me. Our leader wishes to talk to you."
Who is this mysterious pianta? Why did she let them go? How will they reach the President now? Find out, next time!
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Post by UltimoPianta404 on Aug 24, 2011 19:45:37 GMT -5
Umm...Odd. I pictured the chanting to sound like the chanting in Mario Paint. Minus the "Mah-eo-Paint!".
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Post by zommy08 on Aug 25, 2011 12:53:00 GMT -5
Like it! You should write this all in a book and try to get it published. I'm not kidding!
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